Tuesday, December 29, 2009

Have fallen behind again

Have been so busy writing in other places and working on other projects I have not even read the last three readings until today. I really don't have the time right now to catch up either.

Friday, December 25, 2009

Dec. 25: Merry Christmas

Today's reading starts with Fred Whites comments about how Christmas magically transforms the mundane. He further states that writers tend to see story material everywhere/anywhere. However, he also touched on the fact that not all Christmas stories are happy ones. He reminds the reader that there are those for whom the holiday season is one of loneliness.
FOR FURTHER REFLECTION
White talks about how writers, through their stories, can give the gifts of spreading goodwill, making a better world, blessings of joy and peace. He further adds that there can never be enough stories on these topics and they all need to be told.
TRY THIS
Compose a poem or short-story that will instill love or hope or compassion (preferably all three) in the hearts of others. Write it with the intention of reading it aloud to family and friends.

Merry Christmas all.

Thursday, December 24, 2009

Dec. 24: The Ethics of Authorship

In today's writing Fred White discusses ethics as they apply to writing. He presents three key ways that ethics apply to writing; (1) what you write should be your own words and if they are not give credit to the person who uttered, or wrote them, (2) you should ensure that you write is factual unless of course you are writing fiction, and (3) if you are writing an autobiography "convey personal experiences as they actually happened without distortion." If you are going to exaggerate then we should call it "a novel, not a memoir".
FOR FURTHER REFLECTION:
Here Mr. White stated that the reader of a nonfiction has the right to expect the work to be truthful and accurate. However, he does allow for the fact that whenever a lived experience is turned into words there will be some distortion. But taking that into consideration authors should do all they can to "ensure theat the experiences they present are authentic. . . verifiable".
TRY THIS
After you finish a draft of your next essay, article, biography, or autobographical project, check it for accuracy, using the following checklist:
  • Are the dates and names of places and person accurate?
  • Are incidents accurately described? Can they be verified by others?
  • Are facts and explanations accurate?
  • Is the sequence of events accurate?

Not much of this today. I agree with everything Mr. White says. Quoting sources is something that drummed into our heads in college. I don't know of any one who has ever written college term papers who had not heard from their instructor or professor the consequences of not quoting sources, or taking credit for someone else's work. Also I am in a profession that sets very high standards for ethics and I hope I will also maintain the high standards I have to date.

Wednesday, December 23, 2009

Dec. 23: Revelation

In today's reading Mr. White discusses how the Book of Revelation in the Bible has influenced writers through the ages. He discusses how the main theme of the book has been the plot used by many writers. He states that since "the influence of the book of Revelation on world literature is pervasive and profound, which is why writers should be familiar with it."
FOR FURTHER REFLECTION
In this portion White states that prophetic visions appears in all of the sacred texts of all religions and they have all influenced contemporary prophetic works. He further stated that the final battle in which the forces of good triumph over the forces of evil has become synonymous with nuclear holocaust. White feels that this is no accident. He also sated that the prophetic visions of sacred texts have greatly influenced contemporary prophetic works.
TRY THIS
Write a story in which two armies from two radically different cultures (or, if you like to write science fiction, two different planets) confront each other with the fate of a carefully guarded secret at state. What is the precious secret? Why are two mighty armies about to go to war over it? What will be the outcome? That is for you to decide.
This is another assignment that I will probably not work on any time soon. However, there has been an increased interest in recent year in prophetic writings of all kinds. Also a renewed interest in the book of Revelation and the biblical battle Armageddon.

Tuesday, December 22, 2009

Dec. 22: Climaxes and Resolutions

In today's reading the author talks about the importance of the stories climax and then ultimate resolution. He give some suggestions for climaxes and uses a an example, what he called "the simplest kind of climax", is the Western "shootout". He further states that there are a thousand variations of possible endings to a story but the author can only chose one.
FOR FURTHER REFLECTION:
Mr. White states stories are mirrors of reality and as such they heighten the situations we experience in our own lives. However, our experiencs are usually not as pronounced. He uses two types of experiences as examples of climaxes: courtroom verdicts and medical dramas which he believes are the closest to the way we experience cimaxes in real life.
TRY THIS:
1. Study the way two or three novelists construct their respective climaxes; then outline a short story that includes two or more possible climaxes--each one perhaps, mirroring those of the respective novels you've been studying.
2. Write a climax scene to a story that is still in its planning stage. Working out the climax first will give you a better idea of how to dramatically render the steps that lead up to it.
I tried to work on one of the assignments from yesterday at work today only to not have the time because another therapist had to call out and I ended up doing her groups. I will try again tomorrow. Meanwhile these two assignments will go into the growing composition book.

Monday, December 21, 2009

Dec. 21: Holiday Traditions and Innovations

For today Mr. White discusses how that this is the time of year for all the holiday traditions. However, he also states it is a time for innovation, particularly for writers who can put a new spin on the old stories or write new stories with a holiday theme. He urges writers to contribute to the legacy of the holiday season by add a new song, poem, children's story, etc.
FOR FURTHER REFLECTION:
In this section Mr. White also reminds us that this is also the time of the winter solstice which is also a time of festivity that marks the shortest day and longest night but also that "the slow return to spring" has begun.
TRY THIS
Today has three assignments.
1. Write a poem in the manner of "Twas the Night Before Christmas"--only give it a somewhat contemporary spin.
2. Compose the lyrics for a song, perhaps in the manner of "Rudolph the Red-Nosed Reindeer," or "The Chipmunk Song," but use different animals instead.
3. Write a new version of the Kwanzaa folktale "Anansi and His Sons", or of the Dicken's A Christmas Carol.
I am going to have to do some research and maybe tomorrow I will have some time to attempt one or more of these. But tonight don't have the time.

Sunday, December 20, 2009

Dec. 20: Reaching the Finish Line

In today's reading the author talks about how each step in a project is in fact a finish line. It takes several finish lines in able to cross the ultimate finish line which is the end of the project. Even scraping the project somewhere along the line, according to Mr. White, is a finish line.
FOR FURTHER REFLECTION:
According to Mr. White "writers' work includes many finish lines that ought to be acknowledged as suchalong the way to the grand finish line". He states that this is "a simple psychological strategy that keeps one's energy and motivation levels at optimum performance". It also serves as a reminder that writing is a "multistage endeavor".
TRY THIS:
The next time you plan a writing project, regard each step as a finish line. Don't just think it, record it as the headin for each stage--initial one-paragraph overview; initial outline/synopsis; revised outline/synopsis; opening sentence; first paragrah, first page of the discovery draft; and so on.
Writing now my writing efforts are not as detailed. However most of my projects do include a rough draft, research, revised draft, and of course part of the rough draft and revised draft is the opening sentence, first paragraph, first page, etc.

Saturday, December 19, 2009

The irony of it all

This is the first time in days that I have had the time to post anything. It is ironic because when I came to the blog there was a comment from someone commending me on my persistence in, to use her terms "bang the keys". There are times when the way my Lord works things out that just made me laugh. He has such a sense of humor. It also points up the fact that today's technology also connect like minded individuals in ways that we don't even intend or imagine.
So now down to business. Catching up on my comments on the readings since my last post.
Dec. 16: The Art of Concision, or Less is More
In this reading, as can be guessed from the title, is about keeping our writing concise unless there is a very definite reason to not be brief. Mr. White states that most novice writers have a tendency to "overwrite". He then gives three reasons for this: "diction- and syntax-level wordiness, faulty sentence construction, and excessive description, explanation, or narration". He then gives two examples; one of when a short one word sentence would have served a better purpos and one in which the author deliberately uses "stream-of-consciousness language". In "FOR FURTHER REFLECTION": He goes on to say that "writing concisely. . . takes practice". He then suggests a good way to learn to be concise, which is to study the principle in a grammar handbook.
The "TRY THIS" assignment is to practice condensing paragraphs in drafts of essays and stories; both yours and other peoples.
Dec. 17: Inner Listening:
In this day's reading Fred White talks about using listening as a learning experience and to listen with your whole being "holistically", and also to use it as an opportunity for personal growth. The then goes on to talk about The Tao of Peace by Diane Dreher in which she "addresses the need to resolve conflicts" which separates us from the things that are truly important in life. In quoting her he stated that first we need to admit when we are ignorant of certain matters. White further states that as we learn from others, others also learn from us and this learning is greatly "enabled through inner listening". In "FOR FURTHER REFLECTION": White tells us that in order for us to become successful writers we need to "open ourselves to the ideas and experiences of others." We need to listen to them with our whole being, even if we disagree with them. The "TRY THIS" assignment is a suggestion for an experiment in inner listening. Basically he tells us to engage in a discussion with a friend about a particular controversial topic and then after listening carefully to write down what we consider our friend's assumptions about the issue and ask your friend to do the same thing. Then compare notes.
Dec. 18: Visions of Sugarplums
In today's reading the author tells us that holidays (all holidays) "are ideal times for letting your imaginatio roam free". He goes on to state that he means to "explore in a manner unfettered by rules and regulations. He states that for the writer "our sugarplums will take the form of bold new story ideas, whimsical characters, and whimsical situations in which to embroil your whimsical characters." "FOR FURTHER REFLECTION": He suggests that we use every holiday as a potential sugarplum. He suggests that this is particularly beneficial for those who write for younger audiences. The "TRY THIS" assignments are to (1) take several sheets of notebook paper (pages in a composition book) and at the top of each page write a holiday and then over the next few days use these pages to develop lists of topics you can write for each holiday for either children or adults. (2) Then take one of the topics and compose a rough draft in one or two settings. Set this aside for a few days and then revise it.
Dec. 19: Collective Experiences
In today's reading the author addresses the topic of collective experiences. In particular the uses a section of Margaret Mead's study of adolescent behavior among the natives of Samoa, where she lived for several years. Fred White states "by comparing parent-child interaction in two different cultures, Mead enables us to better understand human relationships." In "FOR FURTHER REFLECTION": White states that writers are like anthropologists who help us understand different cultures and customs which in turn "can foster peace and good will". In learning about other cultures we are better able to live in harmony with them. The "TRY THIS" assignment for today is: Learn all you can about a little known society. He suggests those "in the South Pacific, Southeast Asia, the Alaskan and Canadian arctic, or Sub-Saharan Africa. Then assimilate ethnographic studies of their social, religious, and articistic customs. Use this information to write an essay about the society, target for young adults.
As you might have gathered all of these assignments are going to have to be consigned to my composition book for future consideration. There are already enough assignments in that book to keep me busy for a long time. Maybe there will come a time (such as when I retire) that I will have far more time to really work on these assignments. Unless of course I can fit it into something that I need to write - say for a client to get paid for.

Tuesday, December 15, 2009

Dec. 15: Wish Lists

In today's reading Mr. White talks about how various types of wish lists can serve as inspiration for writers and that writers should make wishes even outlandish wishes. Mr. White gives several examples of possible wish lists.
FOR FURTHER REFLECTION:
Here again Mr. White tell us that "wishing and wish-listing are good activities for writers to indulge in." He tells writers that they should in fact allow themselves to "wish uninhibitedly".
TRY THIS:
1. Start keeping a list of fanciful, fantastical, fabulous wishes. Challenge yourself to conjure up the most outlandish wishes you can imagine.
2. After a week or so, review your fantastic wish list and choose one or more of them as the basis for a children's fairy tale or n adult fantasy story.

Dec. 14: Holiday Histories

In this reading Fred White talks about how Holidays offer the freelance writer a wealth of material write about. This is particularly true about the histories of holiday traditions. He offers some suggestions on how to take this material which has already been written about in the past from a new perspective.
FOR FURTHER REFLECTION:
In this section Fred White makes a very interesting comment, one that will give the writer much to think about and write about. "No matter what the subject, it has a history that may prove fascinating enough to tap into for short stories and essays."
As a history buff I can see the truth in this statement. Everything, every topic, every subject has a history attached to it.
TRY THIS:
Brainstorm for unusual story or essay ideas on the history of Christmas, Hanukkah, or Eid. How, for example, did Jews celebrate Hanukkah in Victorian times or during the Renaissance? How many versions of the story of the Three Wise Men (or Magi) can you discover? How did each one originate? What role do children play during Eid?

Sunday, December 13, 2009

What a week

I have really been amiss this week; partly because I lacked the time to set and write and partly because when I had the time I chose to do something else. I am not even going to take the time to put the missed days discussion or assignments here but instead will just post my thoughts about each days reading.
December 8: Sensory impressions
As I read this day's reading I thought about ways in which I could improve my novel that I wrote in November for the NANOWRIMO Challenge. There are several scenes in which several sense could be used. So will store those ideas for the next time I go through the novel to make revisions.
December 9: Cinematic Drafting
This reading inspired me to use a cinematic approach in the opening part of the novel mentioned above. It could be used to lay down the scenery of the town and then a cinematic type viewpoint drawing the reader to the house where the main family lives.
December 10: Exploring the Psychology of Dreams
Although this is an interesting topic I really had no real thoughts about utilizing the topic. I have not really given much credence to dream analysis. However, at some point in some of my stories I might be able to utilize the idea. I know I would not use either of the writing assignments Fred White gave because neither type of story currently interests me.
December 11: Flying by the Seat of your Pants:
The type of writing Fred White describes here is precisely what the NANOWRIMO Challenge is all about. Without research, or other aids the writer was to write a 50,000 word novel in one month. The idea was to get the words down in the computer and then go back after the month ended and fininess the book with aim of possibly getting it published. In order to get that many words down you had to set a goal each day of so many words.
December 12: Critiquing as Coaching:
White talks about viewing critiques by reliable critics as being coached by a writing coach. I really would like to find a reliable critic to go over my writing to see if it is really as viable as I think it is. Of course, I also need to get the final revisions done and then print it off.
December 13: Holiday Foods for Holiday Stories
In this reading Fred White talks about incorporating descriptions of holiday meals into stories. Again back to my novel there are two holiday meals, as well as several other meals that are included. I need to go back over these and include some additional senses as well as more descriptive terminology about the food. This was a relatively easy assignment in the initial writing because There is a wealth of past holiday meals that I can chose from, and a number of holiday meal traditions. This is particularly true with the South where the story is set.
Now if I can keep up with things next week; will be back on schedule.

Monday, December 7, 2009

Dec. 7: Heroes, Superheroes, and Antiheroes

In today's reading Fred White talks about the idea of heroism in writing. He further discusses how complex the idea of heroism has become. He states that now heroes can be flawed and downright unheroic. He also talked about antiheros, "protagonist who violate the very idea of heroism". He stated that these characters are often found in what is called "theater of the absurd". But in this absurdity there is a sense of a deeper commentary on the moral or spiritual crisis that some of our sacrosanct insitutions have fallen.
FOR FURTHER REFLECTION:
White believes that it is only natural in our modern age that heroism should come under artistic scrutiny. He believes that we have not lost our appreciation for heroic acts but we have made our heroes less predictable. They are no longer heroic, mythical peope with magical powers but rather more compatible with our understanding of human nature.
The TRY THIS assignment:
1. Write a story about a flawed hero--say a superman-line crime fighter whogets mixed up with a group of Robin Hood types who decide to help the poor in unconventional ways.
2. Write an absurdist comedy in which your main character is a coward or suffers from paranoid delusions or who decides to live out a childhood fantasy, sacrificing his career as an accountant in the process.
Again another assignment that will have to go into the composition book. It is also one that probably will not be under taken any time soon. But who knows.

Sunday, December 6, 2009

Dec. 6: Free-Associating

In today's reading Mr. White tells us that we have two different types of knowledge. There is ariculate knowledge. This is knowledge that we are aware that we have because we use it on a regular basis. The second type is tactic knowledge which we don't realize that we know because it has been store in our subconsiousness. However, if we will just begin writing without stopping to prematurely edit we will begin to tap into this tactic knowledge. According to White this free association opens the channel to this hidden knowledge.
FOR FURTHER REFLECTION:
Here White says that much of what we learn is placed into deep storage "because we can't find a use for it in our daily lives." However, since writing requires "more dynamic knowledge retrieval". He also states that "the more you write, the thinner will be the boundary between your tactic and articulate knowledge."
Today's TRY THIS assignment:
"Spend a half hour writing nonstop, free-associating on a broad topic, and writing down whatever comes to mind, no matter how irrational or irrelevant it seems. Shut off the editor in your brain that will want to put a stop to such nonsense. Your goal here is to see how readily you can retrieve tactic knowledge about the subject. Afterwards, pluck out the morsels and use them as the basis for a poem or short story.
I like the sounds of this assignment and since I have some free time tonight I may try this assignment after supper. I won't be able to post it here but if it results in anything I will add it to the new blog I am thinking of doing as a storage place for my short stories.

Saturday, December 5, 2009

Dec. 5: The Gift of Reading

In today's reading Fred White states that, as writers we can foster a love for reading in children by giving them gifts of books this holiday season. We can also give books to the adults on our Christmas lists. The gives The New York Times Book Review and The New York Review of Books which are published each year as good sources for gift book ideas for both children and adults. As writers we can serve as examples to our family members to encourage reading.
FOR FURTHER REFLECTION:
Writers are best suited to give reading as a gift particularly for the young people in our lives. White states that "children are naturally voracious readers; yet, sadly, children are sometimes made fun of for readings a lot." However, the adults encourage reading and do so by example "the less likely reading will be an object of ridicule."
Today's TRY THIS assignment:
"Make a list of all your family members. Beside each name, name the books you think he or she would likely enjoy. This will be your gift list for the holidays."
As I have stated else where reading has long been a pleasureable activity for me. As a child I really was a voracious reader. My parents, fortunately, encouraged this activity. They did not always encourage my writing but they always encouraged my reading. My mother was also an avid reader. Her taste in reading was much simplier than mine but she always enjoyed reading. I also encouraged my daughter's love for reading and many of the books she was given, or opted to read, were the same ones I enjoyed reading as a child. We have attempted to encourage this love of reading in later generations. Not always successful but we continue to encourage reading. Now days this is a struggle because television, dvds, computer games are often more enjoyable than readings. We, as a family, though have not given up and do still frequently give books as gifts. They are on the gift list not only for Christmas but also for birthdays.

Friday, December 4, 2009

Dec. 4: Authorship and Marketing

Today's reading deals with the fact that publishing a book is a business venture and a risky one. Mr. White also states that the best way for a new author to break through the competition is to find a reputable agent. He lists three sources to check and see if an agent is reputable. He further states that now days it is a literary agent that does what an editor used to do which is to screen through thousands of proposals in search of promising material.
FOR FURTHER REFLECTION:
Mr. White tells us that althought the competition is formidable to not let that discourage us. "There is always room at the top." We should see the competition as the reason do always do your very best work.
Today's TRY THIS assignment:
After you finish the draft of a book, select the best three chapters and send them, together with a proposal, toa reputable literary agent. The proposal should consist of the following:
  • a detailed chapter-by-chapter outline or synopsis of the entire book.
  • a market analysis: why your book should be published; existing books that are similar to it, how your book is different, and who the target readers will be
  • an estimated time for completion of the book
  • a resume listing your credentials and previous publications
  • a cover letter summarizing your project and a description of the proposal package you're enclosing.
  • a stamped, self-addressed envelope for the agent's reply.

Thursday, December 3, 2009

Dec. 3: Breaking the Rules

In today's writing the author talks about the fact that there are established rules such as sentence structure and grammarical rules. In poetry their are certain types of rhyming patterns. However, sometime new rules and/or practices come into being only by the writers who are daring enough to break the rules. According to the author "essence of art is its daring to penetrate the dark corners of the psyche, of human experience in general. To do that, one cannot be bound by conventional rules."
FOR FURTHER REFLECTION:
It is in artistic context that the aurthority of standard rules diminishes. It is in this artistic context that new rule replace the old ones.
Today's TRY THIS assignment:
Write a story without thinking consciously of the rules of short story writing as you have learned them. (For example, "tell the swtory from one point of view only"; "keep your tense consitent throughout"; "begin a new paragraph when a different person speaks"). After completing the draft, reread it carefully with the rules in mind, and decide which of them you want to eliminate or reinstate as the case may be.
Can't do this one today (again) so it will be placed in the composition book for later consideration.
However, thanks to the spelling and grammar check of modern wordprocessing software programs we have come to depend on these programs to show us where we have made grammatical errors and we can then chose to make the suggested changes or not. It often depends on the context whether I will change or chose to leave the sentence unchanged. If it makes the speaking of the story more conventional or in keeping with the character I will often chose to not change the sentence.

Wednesday, December 2, 2009

Dec 2: Giovanni Battista Tiepolo: "Time Unveiling Truth"

In today Fred White explains this painting by Tiepolo. I really don't grasp what he is talking about but maybe that is because I am really not into this type of art. However, according to White this painting is full of allegories and states that within art or writing the artist/writer can use allegories to represent individuals and objects through complex abstract ideas.
FOR FURTHER REFLECTION:
Here White states that "Tiepolo's painting helps us realize the difficulty of truth to prevail in a world of mortality, vanity, carnal desire, and fear. Yet truth does prevail. She may be vulnerable to the temptations and corruptions of the flesh, but there is a divine spirit that shines forth giving her strength and endurance."
Today's TRY THIS assignment:
Compose an allegorical poem in which you dramatize Time's struggle to expose Truth to the things of the world that will threaten to undo he. You might use as a model Keat's "Ode on Melancholy", in which Melancholy 'dwells with Beauty-Beauty must die;/And Joy, whose hand is ever at his lips/Bidding adieu..."
Again this is an assignment that I defineately do not have time for. It would take more brain cells and research than I really have resources to expend at this time. I'll add it to the composition book but I doubt that I will get to it any time soon because I really am not interested.

Tuesday, December 1, 2009

Dec. 1: Winter Festivals

In today's readings the author states that the months of December and January are full of festivities. According to him the imagery of winter are one of positive associations. "The colder it gets outside, the cozier people make themselves inside." He further state that this is a time when writers can spread good cheer and that there never can be too much good cheer. Therefore the writer should not refrain from writing about holiday season topics even if there have already been a number of writers to do so. He reminds us that everyone has their own distinct voice.
FOR FURTHER REFLECTION:
The writers through the use of our "spirit and imagination" fill the cold dreary months of winter with the magic of "birth and renewal". All of the imagery of past hoiday seasons and even the earlier ancient winter celebrations give the assurance that life and life with ultimately "prevail over death and darkness."
Today's "TRY THIS" assignment:
1. What is your favorite holiday ritual? Write and essay about it and how you have come to love it.
2. Just for fun (or for satiric purposes) invent a ritual and build a fantasy story around it.
The first assignment has already been accomplished. I recently wrote an article for examiner.com on the pleasant memories of my mother's holiday baking and making of special treats. The second assignment will again have to added to the composition book due to lack of time. A few quick thoughts would be to have a winter soltice festival in some prehistorical time maybe instead of the typical depictions of such celebrations set in European settings to have one set in prehistoric America among a Native American tribe like the Anastaze in the southwest.

Monday, November 30, 2009

Nov. 30: Project Connecting

In today's reading Fred White talks about how a writer who has several projects can stimulate the creative juices and overcome writer's block by possibly linking two or more of the projects. The example he gave was a novel set in Washington DC and an essay on the history of the Pentagon. A writer might integrate some of the history of the Pentagon into the novel. According to White by regularly making connections between projects can add life to projects where you may be experiencing writer's block or the project which has lost its momentum.
FOR FURTHER REFLECTION:
Connecting projects can "replenish concentration" and may even lead to those serendipity moments in which ideas generated from one project can "shed unexpected light on the other one." Some writers integrate parts of one project into another just to see what happens to story dynamics.
Today's "TRY THIS" assignment:
Spend the next couple of weeks working on at least two writing projects at once just ot see how this emthod of project connecting affects your productivity. Does it make you more energetic? Does the work you do on one project shed light on the other?

Sunday, November 29, 2009

Nov. 29: Metaphorical Thinking

In today's reading the author; Fred White talks about how metaphors help us transform abstract concepts into concrete representations that stick in our minds. He also states that poetry is largely metaphorical thinking. He also talks about how "we gain insight into the nature of things by comparing them with other things."
FOR FURTHER REFLECTION:
In this segment White states that "A good poet will startle us with metaphors that are at once highly unusual and weirdly fitting." He goes on to give an example but the example that came to my mind was Blake's "Tiger, tiger burning bright like the fire in the night, whose mighty hands forge thee." In this poem the poet uses metaphorical terms connected with a blast furnace and a blacksmith's forging of an instrument, tool, or weapon.
The "TRY THIS" assignment:
Spend a few days getting into the habit of thinking in metaphors. Use your journal to describe objects metaphorically. What do the icicles lining your eaves remind you of? Dragon teeth? The interior of a cave? The entrance of a troll's den? Here a few objects that should lend themselve to metaphoric description:
  • oil well pumps
  • dozens of sunbathers on a beach
  • church bells
  • lightning
  • vegetables, fruits, tubers (bell peppers, melons, squash, ginger root)

Oil well pumps - some strange form of dinosaurs

Sunbathers on a beach - beached whales

Those are the only ones I could come up with in short notice. However, I do remember some from my days of trying to write hiaku poetry.

  • white ducks on a pond looking like marshmallows in a cup of cocoa
  • cat with toy mouse reminding one of a cheetah pouncing on a gazelle
  • pair of buzzards soaring together like a wedding couple in their first dance

Saturday, November 28, 2009

Nov. 28: Conveying Nostalgia

Today's reading is on the use of nostalgia in our writing. White says that when we age we have even more opportunities to use nostalgia. Also because everyone can identify with nostalgia it is easy to move them through the use of nostalgia. When/if we write memoirs we need to include nostalgic experiences.
FOR FURTHER REFLECTION:
Nostalgia captures life's transitions and evoke some of our most emotional experiences. It creates both negative and positive feelings. "By capturing the feelings of nostalgia, we are, in fact, giving our readers a rewarding emotional experiences."
Today's "TRY THIS" assignment.
1. Take yourself on a nostalgic trip through your past: the homesickness you experienced when you went off to college; memories of your grandparent's home; the close friends you had when growing up; the happy sad moments you shared at weddings, confirmations, bar/bat mitzvah, and so on. Write a journal entry for each of these nostalgic memories.
2. Select one of the entries you wrote for number one and turn it into a short story or personal essay.
Although I don't really have time for this today I really need to work this up for Hub Pages and Examiner.com and then work one or more into a possible magazine submission. However, I will not be able to spend much time on this today because I am going to go to an AA meeting tonight and pick up my 27 year chip. Man, I never would have believed I would ever made it this far.

Friday, November 27, 2009

Nov. 27: Telling Stories About Telling Stories

The reading for today is how the writer can tell their story but having a storyteller tell the story. White gives to different examples; the first I don't really remember but the second is probably the best known example of the type of writing/storytelling: Mary Shelley's Frankenstein. White says that the reason some writers use this storytelling method is the "magic of storytelling itself, the intrigue that is instantly generated when someone says, 'Let me tell you a story'". According to White this has an even greater effect if the storyteller seem to be very disturbed by the story or is a survivor of a harrowing experience that has left them "haunted or deranged" as a result of what has happened to them.
For Further Reflection:
Because storytelling is such a subject of wonder writers sometimes tell their story as a story. The readers then "are intrigued by the gradually unfolding connections that are made between what is going oninthe stories being told and the present circumstances."
Today's "Try This" assignment:
Create a story that has a storyteller as its narrator. You might wish to pattern her after Scheherazade or simply present the storyteller as a survivor of a harrowing incidnet who tells the story as a kind of flashback.
I don't have time to work on it but here are some ideas I jotted down in my composition book:
The narrator is:
  • a survivor found washed up on a shore who tells of escaping his/her captors who are indians, or some other group of people (opposing army, kidnappers, etc.)
  • an old woman sharing with a journalist or writer the true story of some incident such as an old murder, or other crime.
  • an old woman sharing the story of her life with great, great grandchildren or a writer. She is over one hundred years old. To add a real twist make the narrator the daughter of the original writer. Opening line: This is the story my mother told me of her great, great grandmother who lived from 1880 to 1990.

This last idea could very well be one I could use because I have already written, in my family history, some of my Grandma Abbott's life. She lived from 1890 to 1995. I could make the story teller my granddaughter Jennifer and have the person who told her the story either me or my daughtr. This has the possibilities for a real multiple layered story.

Thursday, November 26, 2009

Nov. 26: Magic Realism

In today's reading White discusses what he calls magic realism. This is story telling in which the author combines elements of magic with reality. He gives some examples such as Homer's Iliad. The work that comes to my mind is Hocus Pokus. The story of modern day children bring back into being three witches and a boy (who takes the form of a cat) they had cast a spell on in colonial times. When it was made into a movie the humor of the story also became as much a part as the magic.
For Further Reflection
In this segment White states that the boundary between the natural and sueprnatural is not something that is clear cut. His examples for this are: "lovers suddenly discover thawt they can read each other's minds; an archaeologist discovers that he possesses the 'genetic memory' of a Babylonian King.
The "Try This" assignment:
Try you hand at magic realism by describing an incident that take place in a familiar setting--say, an inner-city playground--where, for some strange reason, some of the chldren begin to levitate, or everything begins to change color.
Although I enjoyed the movie mentioned about is this usually not the type of thing I enjoy reading, seeing, or writing about but again this will be an assignment that I will list in my growing list of topics. It might be interesting so write about a couple who steps through something that leaves them with magical powers of some kind. Will need to develop this later at some point in time.

Wednesday, November 25, 2009

Nov. 25: Urban Settings

In this reading Fred White talks about how cities can be interesting for writers because there is so much going on. There is a variety of sights, sounds, smells, cultures, ethnic groups, foods, arts and crafts, etc. in cities. For this reason cities offer a "cornucopia of story possibilities."
For Further Reflection:
In this segment White talks about how it is a paradox that the "noise and distraction of cities" provide the "stimuli for writers". Also in cities writers had an opportunity to really people watch and observe urban life.
The "Try This" Assignment:
Practice describing various urban settings in your journal, even if you have no immediate plans fo writing stories set in cities. People-watching sites would be ideal. Some suggestions:
  • an art gallery during a reception
  • a parade or protest march
  • the lobby or cocktail lounge of a posh hotel
  • a children's museum
  • a street arts and crafts fair

My composition journal is a place to jot down ideas and inspiration from all sorts of people watching opportunities. People watching has long been a hobby with me. I find people amazing and interesting, even those that I am not really very fond of are interesting.

Tuesday, November 24, 2009

Nov. 24: On Speculation

Today's reading is about the benefit of speculation to a writer. White tells the reader that "To be adept at plotting, you should cultivate speculation as reglar habit or mind. Regularly build everyday events into predicaments." He states that it is through speculation that the writer brings about the suspense of the story.
For Further Reflection:
In this section White states that speculation is an important part of effective plotting. Once the writer uses their imagination to create a dire situation for their character(s) they have to speculate on possible solutions to get out of this situation. He also cautions the writer to not settle for the easy solution.
The "Try This" section:
Use your journal (composition book) to practice your speculations skills. Draw a line down the center of a page. The left side will be the "What If" side; the right will be the speculation that answers the question.

Monday, November 23, 2009

Nov. 23: On Existentialism

In today reading the author explains, in a very brief overview, existentialism. He shared Jean-Paul Sarte's interpretation in that people are solely responsible for what happens in their lives because there is no God. He also quoted the behavioral psychologist B. F. Skinner who believed that it was not the will to be free but just behavioral processes characteristic of human beings to avoid the averse features of the environment.
For Further Reflection:
Explains that existentialism is different from metaphyiscalism or transcendentalism because it proponents hold that by manipulating their environment and negotating their needs with others they control their destiny. If they failed then they were in the world of Sartre's play whose mantra was "Hell is other people".
The "Try This" assignment:
Read an introduction to existentialism. The suggested reading is The Philosophy of Jean-Paul Sartre. Then after absorbing this challenging material, write an essay in which you support or refute Sartre's views, or existentialism itself.
Although this sounds like and interesting subject to argue against I really do not have time right now to do the necessary research. However might be something I work on over the Thanksgiving Holiday in order to publish an essay. Really need to get my Alabama Virtual Library card renewed first.

Sunday, November 22, 2009

Nov. 22: Writing and Using Synopses

In today's reading Fred White talks about what a synopsis is, how to write one, and how to use one to help you develop what you are writing. He states that the writers who use synopsis usually have less trial and error. However, using the synopsis after the first draft is written will lead to writing a new draft which will lead to a new synopsis, "one method helps to refine the other".
In "For Further Reflection" he says that a synopsis allows the editor or agent, to whom the writer is going to pitch his writing, to get the clearest, most concise idea of what the work as a whole would be like. With a synopsis the writer can present them with a "lay out (of) the story scene by scene, focusing sharply on key conflict situations."
The "Try This" assignment:
1. In your journal, write a one-page summary of a short story you've been planning in your head. The summary should include the basic conflict situation, the key characters, the climax, and the outcome.
2. Develop the summary you've prepare for number one into a five-page synopsis. This time, go into more detail about character background and motivation, setting, and the twists and tuns of the plot.

Saturday, November 21, 2009

Nov. 21: "Nothing New Under the Sun"

In today's reading White tells us that there are no truely new and unique stories. There are only old stories told from a new perspective, your's as the writer. Although there really are now new stories each of us has a different and unique perspectve and that is what we need to focus on instead of trying to invent a totally new story.
In "For Further Reflection" White also reminds us that despite the fact that we see the world and have a unique perspective, we are enough a like to be able to communicate with others our perspective. It is this ability that allows us to tell old stories in new ways. Also when we depart from our perspective by reading the works of others it is their different perspective that we find entertaining. White tells us to "Think of it as seeing difference embedded in similarity (or vice versa).
The "Try This" assignment for today is:
1. Write a love story that follows, almost faithfully, one of the tried-and-true formulas, such as boy wins girl's affection; boy loses girl's affection to rival lover; boy wins girl's affection back after performing some heroic deed. Change jsut one of the elements of the formula. For example, instead of losing girl's affection to rival lover, make the loss of affection the result of some indiscreationk, such as the boy having said or done something stupid.
2. Write a humorous version of a serious classical story, or a serious version of a humorous classical story. Here are a few possibilities:
The Phantom of the Opera Don Quixote
Gone with the Wind How the Grinch Stole Christmas

Friday, November 20, 2009

Did it again

Well once again am playing catch up after a hectic day yesterday.
Nov. 19: "Never Forget"
In the reading for this day Mr. White talks about not forgetting certain unsavory events in human history like the Cherokee trail of tears, the early injustices of the civil rights movement, slavery, or the Holocausts. However even though these events should never be forgotten they are not easy topics to write about. It is difficult to try to depict man's inhumanity toward men without becoming, as Mr. White describes it, "bathos and melodramatic".
In "For Further Reflection"
He writes that because it is so difficult to right about these atrocities that what we as writers need to do is to focus on only a minuscule portion of the whole. We should not according to White allow the subject matter to overwhelm any rational thesis we may be writing.
The "Try This" assignment is:
Write about a painful moment in history, say the persecution of Christians in the Roman arenas. Tell the story of the persecution from the point of view of a single person who is about to be thrown to the lions.

Nov. 20: Reading to Motivate Writing
In today's reading Fred White talks about how successful writers are avid readers. In fact he calls us "gluttons of reading" because of our facination with different ways of storytelling and using words to convey meaning. However, he urges us to hone this skill by reading outside of our normal genre because we can learn much about storytelling, writing styles, and "worldviews that are different from our own."
"For Further Reflection"
In this segment White talks about how reading can be a way of overcoming writer's block and "to rekindle the writing flame," because it is a way of indulging ourselves in the "pleasure that make us want to become writers in the first place."
Today's "Try This" Assignment is:
1. Pick up a book or magazine and, with pen and paper within easy reach, begin reading one of its stories or articles. Your aim here is to be on the alert for whatever it is in the piece of writing that triggers an idea, however vague. As soon as it comes, stop reading and jot it down.
2. Go over the notes you've taken for number one, and select one of them to work into a story or essay.
Actually I have done this in preparation for an article that I am working for my examiner.com page. I may also write it from a different perspective to Hub pages. In fact there are several that I am working on that I have sort of done this with.

Wednesday, November 18, 2009

Nov. 18: On Making Connections

The reading for today talks about making connections, connections between ideas, places, musings, etc. According to Mr. White these connections add texture and intrigue to the story that you are telling. He suggests taht in order to insure that your story has such imaginative connections then your story should have plenty of variables and/or loose ends to connect. One of the ways to do this according to Mr. White is to, "turn off (or at least lower the volumne of) the logic center of your brain, and allow for a certain degree of free-associating." In order to do this you need to allow your subconscious to make "connections among seemingly unconnectable ideas."
For Further Reflection:
In this section White uses as his example of a writer using "his soul" to connect things, a poem by Walt Whitman entitled "A Noiseless, Patient Spider".
For Today's "Try This" assignment:
Examine a recently completed essay, poem, or short story and pinpoint the connections you've established in it. Did you compare and contract one idea or individual with another. In my case if I were to take time to write about this it would be in regard to my major writing project right now which is writing a 50,000 word novel in one month. As a part of November Is National Novel Writing Month the website by the same name has an annual challenge which challenges writers and would-be writers to write 50,000 words of a potential novel in the month of November (30 days). Part of what I am writing has a number of different connections and comparisons beginning with the title "Knights of Rhodes" which actually refers to an off-shoot of the Knights Templar after the fall of Jeruselem in the 1400-1500. When a portion of the group relocated to the Aegan island of Rhodes (part of Greece). There is even a medival castle still found in Rhodes that was built by these knights who operated from there as mercenaries. The comparisons are many; between siblings of two different generations, problems with teenagers and aging parents, pre and post relapse recovery, and possibly even more that I really have not explored completely.

Tuesday, November 17, 2009

Nov. 17: City Sounds

In today's reading the author talks about how "we are creatures with one foot rooted in the natural world and the other in the artifical world of our own devising." He further states that we may think it would be pleasant and serene to return to a more natural way of life but most of us would not enjoy truely returning to nature. According to Mr. White we are much to ingrained into our created world and the natural rhythms that occur there than we will ever be to our natural world. In other words we have lived in cities for so long they have become for many of us our natural world instead of the nature we think we might enjoy. He also discusses how our created world has a natural rhythmic quality which is more like jazz than the classical orchestral music of nature.
For Further Reflection:
Mr. White offers us some additional food for thought in this section when he tells us that we, as writers, need to tap into the "Kaleidoscope of sounds" that communicate much about our modern lief. He further states that as writer we can gain energy by becoming attuned to these "harmonies and dissonances" that are the rhythm of life in modern cities.
Today's "Try This" assignment:
Over the next several days become a student of city sounds. Pay close attention to the subtler urban sounds that may be obscured by the more obnoxious ones: sounds emanating from factories, airports, shopping malls; evening and nocturnal sounds; early morning sounds. Visit a city park and record what you hear there. How do those sounds differ from those encountered in wilderness areas? maintain a written record of the sounds you encounter in these various urban locations.

Monday, November 16, 2009

Nov. 16: Dictionary Play

In today's reading the author, Fred White, suggests that we turn to the dictionary to "play". He had several suggestions such as reading the adjacent words to a word you looked up. Which he believes will possibly help stimulate additional or different thoughts on something we are writing. He also believes that this can get us to rethink what we are working on and "send us back to the drawing boards to rethink our projects from scratch." He believes if you use the dictionary for fun you will retain the information you learn much longer than if you just try to study the dictionary.
For Further Reflection:
In this segment Mr. White recommends using the Oxford English Dictionary as a reference tool. He also suggests that we spend several hours now and then with this dictionary to enrich our knowledge of the English Language. By his discription this is a rather large collection as it contains 20 volumns. This means a trip to the library which unfortunately I really don't have time for right now but maybe at some point in time when I have more time I will be able to do that as it sounds like fun.
Today's Try This assignments:
1. Open your desk dictionary at random and jot down every word and meaning that is unfamiliar to you (in the unlikely event that you know every word on those two pages, turn to the next page). Next, write a paragraph or two in which you put each of your newly learned words into use.
2. Open your dictionary at random and choose a single word that strikes your fancy. Use that word to spark an idea for a poem, an essay, a short story, or a play.
Well here we go again. This is becoming my sad refrain; this is another assignment I am going to have to put in the good old composition book. However, I may have to revise it later this week if I have any spare time, as it really does sound like a fun assignment.

Sunday, November 15, 2009

Nov. 15: Capturing the Inner Logic of Dreams

Mr. White starts today's reading by stating that "even in our sleep we are storytellers". The stories are of course our dreams. He again makes the suggestion that we keep dream journals so that we can better understand the content and sequencing of our dreams. Then we can use this to develop the inner compulsions and desires of our characters. For me my dreams have a certain repeative nature, particularly of settings and characters. Many of them are about my past. It is rare that I dream about the current happenings in my life or even future ones. I not certain what that says about myself. Maybe I just have a unconscious wish to never grow old or to relinquish a certain point in my life.
For Further Reflection:
Here Mr. White states that "keeping a dream journal is a kind of biofeedback phenomenon: The greater your effort to cature your dreams, the more vividly your dreams become," Now I don't know that my dreams are any more vivid than they were before I started keeping a dream journal but I know that they remain rather bizarre, as they always have been. There are times though when I know that some of them might make the basis of a good story and I do have a couple of story ideas that are a result of the rather repeatious scenarios of my dreams.
Today's Try This assignment:
1. Give yourself a full month to get into the knack of recording your dreams. First , you will need a dream journal that you'll keep on the nightstand within easy reach. Every morning (or in the middle of the night as the case may be) upon awakening, immediately jot down as much of your dream(s) as you can recall. Don't take time to edit. Even seemingly wrong or inappropriate usage can be revealing.
2. Over the next few weeks prepare lists of desires, fantasies, compulsions for some of the characters in your short story or novel in progress.
I keep my dream journal in the bathroom because that is the first place this old woman heads when she wakes up. It is here that I record as much of the dream that I can remember. I'm not certain about making these desires, fantasies, or compulsions apply to the characters in any of my works but I might some day.

Saturday, November 14, 2009

Nov. 14: History in Fiction

In today's reading Fred White discusses how writers can made history come alive. The writer can take a historical event and bring it alive by the reader by allowing the to be am imagery fly on the wall at significant events. Now the really is not really there but if the writer it skilled in his art he tells of the event in such a way to make the scene come alive for the reader. I know that for me this was one of the things that I first really enjoyed about reading. From the time I learned to read something beyond the basic readers I liked historically base first. In fact I still remember an early juvenile series that captured my imagination. It was called the "We Were There" series and told of historical events from the perspective of someone who would have actually taken part in the event. I still occassionally enjoy readings a good historically based fictional novel.
For Further Reflection:
In this segment Mr. White suggests that to make history more personal and papiable history teacher might ask their students to read novels set in the time they are studying. My most recent study of history was when I returned to college and had to attend three semesters of American History and our professor did something along those lines. She would show movies that were set in the time of history we were studying. Again movies are simply books brought to life by actors and scenery.
For today's Try This assignment White tells us to:
Invent a character who becomes an eyewitness to a historical even, such as the assassination of Julius Caesar or the attempt to those two obsure bicycle mechanics at Kitty Hawk to get a machine to fly, and write a page describing that event in as much minute detail as you can to give readers the impression taqt they have entered that world.
Again another assignment that gets consigned to the composition book. I need to write more on my NoNaNoWriMo novel, also need to get a couple of articles for examiner and hubpages. I also need to do two more chapters in my two book blogs. However, if I ever run out of things to write about I certain have a going list of choices to work on.

Friday, November 13, 2009

Had to combine again

Doing two days again. Work this week has really been crazy. Hopefully next week will be better.
November 12: Critiquing Objectively
In this reading Mr. White is talking about critiquing another writer's work. His instruction is to not let personal tastes enter into the evaluation but rather be objective and use as a criteria widely adopted standards regarding story and other mechanics of storytelling such as character development, use of dialogue, backstory, suspense-building, etc. In using these standards your critique will be more objective and less subjective (or about personal tastes).
For Further Reflection:
Here Mr. White tells us to see objectivity and subjectivity as lying at the ends of a spectrum. The goals is to make your critique fall as close to center as possible. This way you will (according to White) not let your personal tastes influence you and lean more towards the standards for good storytelling.
Try This Assignment:
Prepare a list of "objective" criteria for evaluating a short story or essay. (This becomes tougher with poetry.) Use this list as a springboard for evaluating a fellow writer's work; it will prevent you from become too subjective.

November 13: (Friday the 13th) Wine Conoisseurship
In today's reading Fred White talks about how being a wine conoisseur has a particular volaculary. He also discussed the growth in many countries of wine as a symbol of the good life and an increased interest in wine and wine tasting. He states that because of wine's symbolic value becoming familiar with all aspects of wine; where it is grown, how it is made, what happens at wine tastings, how you go about choosing wine are something that a writer should pay some attention toward these areas for story purposes.
For Further Reflection:
In this segment Mr. White gives additional areas where a writer would be interested in wine. He stated that in areas of fine dining and celebrations, ancient times, and modern festivals that honor wine; "wine and wine culture offer writers a wealth of material"
Try This Assignment:
1. Expand your knowledge of wine and wine lore, and plan a story--say, a romance in which teh couple's mutual love of wine extends to love for each other, or a fantasy about a winemaker who creates a wine that imparts supernatural abilities to its imbibers.
2. Write an essage on the art of selecting different wines for different kinds of meals or for different occasions.

These three assignments are again something that will have to get relegated to the rapidly expanding composition book. First because I do not really have time to explore other writer's abilities right now. Two I really don't have time for much more other than the several writing projects I am already working on. Although the second assignment for today is something that I may do soon just because one website where I post things is always looking for well written essays on various topics. However, before I do that I really need to brush up on my essay writing.

Wednesday, November 11, 2009

Nov. 11: Experience as Experiment

In today's reading the author discusses personal experience as experiments in living and the bases for writing essays. He further emphasises this in his discussion of the anthology by Philip Lopate The Art of the Personal Essay which features essays by various authors on such topics as death, laughter, starting in a writing career, and being in bed with a migraine. According to White no experience is so trivial that it can not be used to write an essay about the underlying lesson.
"For Further Reflection:
Per Fred White "the art of the essay is the art of prodding and poking at an idea or an experience until it yields the most meaning." White quotes Edward Hoagland's introduction to the Best American Essays, 1999 as saying essays "stimulate the mind's own processes in a murky and incongruous world". Therefore every good essay can be utilized to by the writer as another example in how an intelligent person struggles with the lack of clarity and inconsistencies in life.
"Try This" assignment:
1. Use your journal to list, and briefly describe, all kinds of experiences, large and small. Do not judge them according to "significance". The most seemingly insignificant experience can yield much wisdomo.
2. Each week for five weeks, develop one of the experiences you listed for number one into an essay.
List of experiences.
Being the oldest child
Being an Army wife
Living in a foreign country (Korea & Germany)
Being a recovery alcoholic
Changing careers in midlife
Going back to college after 40
Being an addiction's counselor
Being a grandmother
Being a great grandmother before 60
Death of a parent
Therapist working with adolescents versus adults
Being an empty nester
Having pets
Being married to an introvert when your and extrovert
But as usually don't have time to write on this right now.

Tuesday, November 10, 2009

Nov. 10: Dreams Within Dreams

White's writing for today is basically a question. A questions that has been asked since the time of Edgar Allen Poe. The question "Is what we see as reality really real or is it a dream inside a dream?" Since our technological age's invention of virtual reality and film like Total Recall and The Matrix: can we be certain that what we think of as reality is real? What if what we think is reality is actually some sort of computer generated simulation? He stated that for the writer these questions can make for a good story line or plot.
"For Further Reflection" Continues this idea that since the dawning of the computer age has changed our understanding of reality some may question whether their waking world is real or a dream.
The "Try This" assignment for today:
1. Write a story in which your viewpoint character discovers that what he assumed was the real world was actually a dream world.
2. As a variation of number one, imagine that your viewpoint character is living inside what we readers can see is a cyber-universe, a simulation that, for your character's perspective, is the real world. Imagine that something disastrous happens in this cyber-universe. How will your protagonist escape, if at all?
Again this is an assignment that I will most likely not take on. I do not like sci-fi and in fact have not even seen the movies that White references in today's reading. There might come a time when I decide to try this genre but it will not be anytime soon if my movie or television viewing, or my reading are any indication.

Monday, November 9, 2009

Nov. 9: Multiple Drafting

For today Fred White has give directions that we try to work on multiple story drafts at the same time. He believes that this is a good way to cope with writer's block and also that working on one story might trigger ideas for the others or vice versa. He even suggests that you work on different stories in different rooms (not something I can do unfortunately). In "For Further Reflection" he discusses how working on multiple stories may be actually help creative individuals and "seen as a physical manifestation of one who gets bored easily by doing only one thing at a time."
Today's "Try This" assignment:
Start work on a story or essay; once you are well into it--and at a convenient stopping point--begin work on a second story or essay (it's okay to shift genres). Keep shifting from one project to the other until both are completed. In your journal, describe the experience of working on two projects at once.
Actually I am already doing this but with five stories not two. I have the four stories that I have started as a result of this book and then my 50,000+ word novel for NaNoWriMo. I work on the novel everyday (at least for the month of November) that is the idea behind that concept. Then the other four I work on either during the week or weekend or whenever the inspiration strickes me. I at least re-read the draft which triggers other points or a pickup point to continue the story. The idea of multiple project is something I have done most of my life. Right now in addition to the writings, I have this blog and four others, as well as my knitting/crocheting projects. And there are my articles that I submit weekly for examiner.com and hubpages.com. I'm not really sure what that says about me other than maybe I'm just scattered. It is because of all of this plus my job that makes my quiet time daily with God and His Word so important. I need that time to just quiet my mind down to relax.

Sunday, November 8, 2009

Nov. 8: Describing with Precision

In this reading Fred White discusses the importance of detailed and precise descriptions to draw the reading into the story. It is through these descriptions that the reader is able to visualize the scene. White talked about the descriptions in The Ambassadors by Henry James. Whenever I think of detailed, precise descriptions I am reminded of the books written by Lois Lamour. His descriptions of the western territories in his books allows the reader to visualize the grandeur of the scene. In particular his descriptions of the Four Corners area where Colorado, Arizona, New Mexico, and Utah come together are so precise and detailed as to be described as breath taking just as the actual scenes can take away a person's breath. It is this ability that White states in "For Further Reflection" when he says that "Precise description has a cinematic effect: It allows readers to visualize the story, to experience the sensuous delights of a setting.

"Try This" assignment for today:

1. Practice prescised description by describing a room in your home in meticulous detail. After finishing your description, test it ou by reviewing the details in the room and seeing if you missed anything.

2. Describe a character's appearance in two different ways; in formal dress at a special event such as a concert or wedding; then in casual dress in an informal setting, such as a beach.

Again won't have time to do #1 justice but here is a quick attempt to describe my office/craft room/television room. The room is actual a spare bedroom. It contains two computer desks. One is white and natural wood with main desk and a shelf unit that sets on top of it with four compartments under the top shelf. The second is all wood finish and the shelfing unit does not go all the way across the desk top but only 2/3 of the way. It has three compartments under the top shelf. I also has a shelving unit on the side with two shelves to hold books. Both desks have drawer and drop down to hold computer keyboard below the desk deck. On the wood finish and white desk sit a fan, a laptop, and printer. On the all wood finish desk, sits a computer, printer, computer tower, telephone, and small plastic bin with drawers that holds pens and pencils along with bottles of nail polish.
Beside the one desk is a wood finish two drawer file cabinet. Besid the other is two stacks of white plastic cubes that hold books. There are two black desk chairs in front of the two desks and a foot stool sets in front of one. In front of the other is a TV tray. In front of the two stacks of white bins is a Cassio keyboard and beside that a cart with two drawers full of yarn. Below the keyboard is a large basket that contains books and yarn. In front of the desk on the wall with the bedroom closet is the table that holds the television, cable box, and dvd/vcr players. A black coat hangs on the closet door. Inside the closet are several bins stack one on top of the other that holds left over yarn, and other craft supplies.
Assignment #2 is being included in the novel I am working on for November is National Novel Writers Month. One of the key characters is preparing to attend a homecoming dance and I will describe in detail her clothes. I have already described in some detail her day attire for school.

Saturday, November 7, 2009

Nov. 7: "Flat" vs. "Round" Characters

In this writing Fred White discusses what he credits E. M. Foster (Aspects of the Novel) with calling "flat" and "round" charters. According to White flat characters are those that can be described in one simple sentence and he gives as an example the character, Mrs. Micawber, in David Copperfield. While, his description of a round character as someone who is much more complex such as Becky Sharp in Vanity Fair who White saw as both traditional heroine and traditional villain.
"For Further Reflection": Here White states that just like real life, authors create characters who are "more allegoical embodiments of certain virtues or vices"; as well as those characters that are much more complex and at times inconsistent or unpredictable.
The "Try This" assignment:
In your journal, set aside four---pages two of them labeled "flat characters" and the other two "round characters". Now compose two character profiles for each type. Remember that the flats will embody a certain type: the con artist, the fanatic. Rounds will not fit into a mold.
I have added these four page labels to my composition book and when time permits will work on the assignment, or when such an assignment will fit into the story I am working on.

Nov. 6: Idea Mapping

Sorry but once again a day late in getting this published. Supervisor was around most of yesterday for annual evaluations and then last night I really wanted to finish a sweater I was re-working.
So this day's reading was on the brainstorming technique that Fred White calls "Idea Mapping".
He shows a diagram of how it looks and it makes developing a idea in such a way that it has a visual deminsion and it demonstrates connecting between the main idea and its offshoots.
"For Further Reflection" carries this idea of bring abstractions (the main idea) into more a more sensory experience. It isn't White's idea that abstracts should be avoided but that making them visual makes them easier to work with.
The "Try This" assignment:
1. Create an idea map for your next writing project. Begin by placing the topic in te center of the page, and free-associate to generate subordinate ideas. Use differently colored pencils to draw connections between primary, secondary, and tertiary relationships.
2. Transform the idea map you prepared for number one into a first draft, inventing new connections as you go along.
I think I will try this idea later today when I work on an examiner.com article related to Thanksgiving. I really have two rather abstract ideas that I want to pursue so think I'll do both this way.

Thursday, November 5, 2009

Nov. 5: Building a Writer's Library.

Today's reading was about the necessity of building a library of books. The author believes that there are two categories of books that every writer regardless of genre should have. The first is books that demonstrate superbe writing--masterpieces of both fiction and nonfiction. Second books on the craft of writing along with a good set of reference books.
In "For Further Reflection" he gives a list of necessary reference books, some of which are common sense like a style manual and a very good dictionary plus a guide to writing and publishing, an up-to-date market guide, and how-to books on your particular genre. Then he states you also need to build up some basic reference books such as world history, regional histories (for the story locations you most write about), and specialized dictionaries such as biology, geology, psychology, mythology, quotations.
Today's "Try This" assignment is :
Set up a row of books on your desk (or within arm's reach) that you refer to most frequently when working on a given project. The aim here is to have books you can refer to quickly without disrupting the momentum of your writing. Over the next several weeks, use your journal to keep tabs on how you made use of those books.
I have some of the reference books he recommends along with books in the genres I most like to write. I also can access information regarding world history and regional history on-line. The same goes for specialized dictionaries. I am beginning to build a small library (mostly contained in one three-ringed binder and ultimately probably two) of things like market guides, how-to books etc. that I have been able to purchase on-line and download.

Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Nov. 4: Slanting Your Work

In today's reading the author, Fred White, is talking about writing for magazines. He gives some good suggestions for determining the "slant" of the magazine. He also reminds writers that magazine editors tell prospective authors to study the magazine before submitting something to better insure that it will be material the magazine will want to publish. Rememeber magazines are gear towards a particular audience. Also if you belong to professional associations that publish magazines or journals checkout their guidelines for submission throughly before submitting. White suggests that you throughly examine two editions of the magazine(s) you want to submit article(s) too. Then re-read/rewrite your material in line with what you have determined is the material and style the magazine is looking for.
In "For Further Reflection" White states that in writing for magazine(s) "Success depends on whether the periodical in question succeeds in offering subscribers what they look forward to reading from one issue to the next." In other words remember our ultimate audience is not the editor(s) of the magazine but the individuals who read that magazine. If you can not provide that type of material then don't waste your time or the editors time submitting something that they can not use (my advice not his).
Today's "Try This" assignment:
Before sending a story or article to a magazine you hope to publish your work, study at least two issues of that magazine throughly. First, read every selection, even it that selection represents a genre you don't write in. The reason is that fiction and articles overlap in terms of the subject matter and tone. The, write or revise the manuscript and submit it.
I have the submission guidelines for several professional journals/magazine and plan on submitting a professional paper soon. I also have guidelines for devotionals to a couple of on-line devotional websites that I enjoy readings and have in fact submitted devotionals to them.

Tuesday, November 3, 2009

Nov. 3: Unpopular or unsavory views

In today's reading the author approachs the fact that writers, because they express unpopular viewpoints, are criticized. But he encourages us to write those things that others may not agree with. He uses as an example the excellent photographs of Aanie Leibovitz in her collection Women because they challenge the sterotypical notions of femininity and feminine beauty.
In the Section "For Further Reflection" he encourages writers to be willing wo weather ridicule by approaching innovative or controversial ideas and unconventional manners of new expression. He also advises us to be confident in our convictions but at the same time be willing to consider the some of our views or the manner in which we express them might need revision.
The "Try This" assignment for today (again won't have time to get too) is:
1. In a journal entry, describe in detail someone whose appearance or behavior unsettled you.
2. What do you instinctively turn away from? Homelss persons? People whose physical appearance or manner of dress you find distasteful? List everything you can think of that you ignore or avoid. Now, write a story in which you make a hitherto unsavory character the hero.

Monday, November 2, 2009

Nov. 2: Henry Fuseli: "Oedipus Cursing His Son, Polynices"

In today's reading Fred White talks about the tragedy of Oedipus and his family as seen in the painting by Henry Fuseli. White states "Fuseli's painting is both haunting and moving: a family torn apart by wrongdoing, one tragic even leading to another." In the section "For Further Reflection" White goes on to state that "from ancient Greek drama to contemporary drama and novels, the most poignant misfortunes that befall human beings are tied to moral blindess." He also adds that physical blindness is often symbolic of moral blindness. He equates Oedipus to the Biblical story of Samson.
I have noticed that quite often in modern literature the writer has just given a modern spin to an ancient story from anciety mythology or the Bible. A good case in point was the concept behind the recent television series "Kings" which was just a modern rendering of the story of Saul and David again from the Bible.
Today's "Try This" assignment is:
Plan a story in which a character's moral blindness eventually leads to his literal blindness. You might want to retell the story of Oedipus or Samson in a modern context--e.g., your Oedipus counterpart is made the CEO of a giant corporation after marrying the daughter of the companys' founder--who had been an intimate friend of your main character's mother...
Again will not be able to work on this assignment any time soon but will add it to the good old composition book for future referrence. Then if struck by writer's block will have one more story to begin on to over come the block.

Sunday, November 1, 2009

Nov. 1: Concerning Rituals

In today's reading Mr. White talks about how authors can use rituals in their writing. Rituals help keep alive cultural practices and traditions. Some of our rituals today are connected to long standing religious practices, while other rituals are considered barbaric. Mr. White, however, believes that the barbaric rituals make for compelling fiction particularly in the occult/horror genre. As usual he gives some examples. Todays examples are The Omen and The Exorcist.
In "For Further Reflection" the author talks about how rituals can deepen one's experience of a religion or cultural tradition. He also gives a couple of sources for learning about ancient and primitive religious rituals: The Golden Bough and Coming of Age in Samoa. Me personally I have learned a great deal by watching things like The History Channel International, The Travel Channel, and The Discovery Channel. All regularly feature cultural anthropoligists views of cultures current and ancient. Even the Travel and Science channel can sometime expand one's knowledge of these area. One series that appeared on the Animal Planet recently was Wild Pacific which include segments on Polyonesian culture.
Today's "Try This" assignment:
1. Outline a horror story that includes one or more rituals. Research the practice of these rituals so that you can convey them realistically.
2. Study the religious or coming-og-age rituals practiced by a non-Western culture, such as Samoa or Tibet; then, outline a story that is set in this culture.
Again I do not do horro but this first assignment reminds me of a recent special on Discovery Channel about Indiana Jones and whether these movies bore any truth about archeologists and archeology. In particular one of the rituals in "Temple of Doom" I think where Indy and his two companions were trapped by a cult and made to participate in a ritual. According to the archeologists who were being interviewed these scenes were based in reality and some ancient cults.
For assignment number two I don't have time at this time but have through reading and watching the above mentioned shows already have done part of the research. Not only of non-Western culture but also native american culture which had some unusual coming of age rituals.

Saturday, October 31, 2009

Oct. 31: Getting Rid of Bad Writing Habits

Today's reading is about getting rid of bad writing habits and a little bit about what some of those are. One that I can think of one right off the bat is writing carelessly, hastily without taking time to truely develop my subject material. This is particularly true if I am trying to write on an assignment. Unfortunately I tend to do that with my examiner.com material. Need to spend more time researching and interviewing like I did when I first started this. In the "For Further Reflection" today the author gives some useful suggestions for getting rid of these habits but creating new habits. I particularly like the idea of setting aside time to develop character profiles.
Today's "Try This" assignment is:
Draw up a list of all the bad writing habits you've succumbed to over the years. If you can't think of any, you'd better reassess your writing habits soon. Better yet, have a friend--someone on whom you can rely for objective criticism--read a few of your drafts with a close critical eye. Over the next several weeks, make a conscious effort to get rid of those bad habits that your friend points out.
Well I guess I need to print off a few of the stories I am working on and have Vicki read them with a critical eye to suggest/or point out bad writing habits.

Friday, October 30, 2009

Oct. 30: Preventing Writer's Block

In today's reading the author suggests two activites to prevent, not just get through, writer's block. The first is the one that all published writers tend to give and that is to just keep writing. Even if you can't think of anything to write on the current project write something. The suggestions given are : write a list of future characters, write a letter to your mother or imaginary or famous person, or compose a greeting card verse. The key is to just keep writing. The second activities is to play word games. Again his suggestion is to chose ten random words from a dictionary and use them to compose a meaningful paragraph.
"For Further Reflection". The author reminds us that writer's block is preventable and we need to find strategies that work best for us. Even taking a small break and engaging in another activities for a while can be helpful. It will also help you gain a different perspective.
The "Try This" assignment for today is:
The next time you're blocked, ask someone to select three or more words from the newspaper. Use those words in the first paragraph of a story.
So far since I have started writing daily I have not faced writer's block. I have been able to write something. Maybe not something that gets accepted but at least I am learning. Like one website I have learned is really looking for more technical material and therefore only when I might want to write a non-professional article related to my profession will I be able to write something that will possibly be purchased on that site. If I were to do that I am much more likely to submit the article to professional magazines I already am subscribed too. I don't always have time to write the daily assignment but that growing list in my composition book is also a possiblity to work through writer's block on a particular story or article. Or I could work on writing a devotional to be submitted to one of several devotional sites that I read on a regular basis.

Thursday, October 29, 2009

Oct. 29: Occult Symbols

Today's reading is about how "the supernatural world is rich in symbolism" according to Mr. White. He further says that "writing is a kind of occult, shamanistic activity in the way it enhances the reality of symbols." According to Mr White writers use words to "conjure up" new realities. This is particularly true in the genre of horror fiction which is loaded with symbolism and also generates even more symbolism just by the telling of the story. As I read that paragraph I did not think of "Hansel and Gretel" and the picture of the gingerbread house but of the white hockey mask that is forever linked in many peoples' minds now with murder and mayhem thanks to the "Jason" movies.
"For Further Reflection" today speaks of how there are a number of symbols that are recognized as either good or evil so that when a writer uses these symbols they do not have to state that they are good or evil the reader just automatically knows. However, the writer can also generate their own symbols.
Today's "Try This" assignment:
1. Make a list of objects (lamps, old photographs, trophies, clocks) that might carry symbolic value in an occult story.
2. Work up a horro story that includes conventional symbols of good and evil along with symbols of one or the other, or both, that you have invented.
This is an assignment that I will probably not do, or be very slow about doing. Basically because I do not like the genre of horror or sci-fi. They just do not appeal to me and never have. In fact, in spite of the fact that they are considered classic literature, I have never read (nor do I plan too) The Pit and the Pendulum, or Frankenstein. Even when required reading in Americal or English Lit I would do the quick read through of the cliff notes if at all possible. If there was an alternative I would chose the alternative assignment.

Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Oct. 28: Writing Satire

According to Fred White "Satire is sarcasm raised to the level of literary artistry. It pokes fun at hypocrisy, short-sightedness. It can be heavy-handed, even bitter in its attack, or it can be a gentle ribbing." He gives as the best example of a writer who used heavy-handed satire the writer Jonathan Swift. His examples of the second type are some modern day comedians to include Charlie Chaplin, Lenny Bruce, Lily Tomlin and George Carlin. He states that whether it is done in a serious or a comedic manner the purpose of satire is to alert readers to the "ethical shortcomings of practices that. . . seem altogether ethical." In the section "For Further Reflection" White explains that satire combines both emotional responses and our intellect it can overcome evel the most logical argument because it generates a keener emotional response.
Today's "Try This" assignment is to:
Test your satric wit by writing a story that pokes fun at some aspect of contemporary culture. Here are some possibilities:
  • celebrity hounding
  • what people say they value most in a presidential candidate vs. whtat they secretly value most
  • courtship rituals

This one will take some thought and right now I have not ideas at all my brain has not yet woke up for the day.

Tuesday, October 27, 2009

Oct. 27: Interior Drama

In today's reading Mr. White talks about how stories unfold in the internal (mind) of characters as well as through external events. In the "For Further Reflection" he comments on how the human mind still has "unfathomable depths". Inspite of all the knowledge we have gained of the workings of the human brain there are still mysteries regarding consciousness and unconsciousness that we do not understand. Mr. White believes that enough has been learned about the workings of the human mind to make for some "compelling internal drama".
Today's "Try This" assignment:
Compose an interior drama from the perspective of one whose mental state is characterized by one of the following symptoms
  • paranoia
  • delusions of grandeur
  • one of the phobias, such as a fear of heights
  • obsessive-compulsive behavior
  • seasonal affective disorder

Don't have time to work on it today but there is one story that I am working on regarding two women one newly sober and one with long term sobriety that the first two symptoms could be included in. Particularly the newly sober woman. Could even blend the last symptom into the information regarding the woman with more sobriety. It sometimes happens that individuals with long-term sobriety realize that they have problems with depression.

Monday, October 26, 2009

Oct. 26: On Sorcery

In today's writing the author discusses how art can enhance everyday reality and that enhancement if a form of socery. He further states that "art helps us find magic and beauty in the real world."


In the section "For Further Reflection": He states that art in this sense enchants and bewitches us and it represents the animation of our imagination. It is our human ability to take the raw stuff of nature and transform it into a story. By the same token the art can add sorcery to our everyday lives, a way in which reality imitates fiction.


The "Try This" assignment for today is:


1. Write a poem about the sorcery you detect in the everyday world.


2. Outline a story in which your main character, dissatisfied with the way his love life is progressing, decides to add some sorcery to it. What kind of sorcery does he resort to? Does it work or does it backfire? what are the consequences.



In order for me to fully understand this assignment I looked up the definition of sorcery

1. A noun. Use of supernatural power over others through the assistance of spirits; witchcraft.
The American Heritage® Dictionary of the English Language, Fourth Edition copyright ©2000 by Houghton Mifflin Company. Updated in 2009. Published by Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.

2. A. Verb. (Spirituality, New Age, Astrology & Self-help / Alternative Belief Systems) the art, practices, or spells of magic, esp black magic, by which it is sought to harness occult forces or evil spirits in order to produce preternatural effects in the world. Also from The American Heritage Dictionary of the English Language.

3. The Merriam-Webster Dictionary definition is the use of magic or witchcraft.

Therefore, although I do not have time to do the outline at this time, I think my story would be of a man who went to New Orleans famed voodoo priestess Marie LaVue for a magic spell to cast on the woman of his desires.

Sunday, October 25, 2009

Catching up again




Oct. 24: "Tell It Slant"
According to the author the title from this day's writing is a quote from an Emily Dickenson poem. It related to a writer needing to tell the truth or known paradigms in a different and even at times indirect way. According to Fred White they need to do this because if they told the blinding truth or philosphy in an obvious way the reader would consider it as being "preachy". The same is also true of using a set of story-telling conventions. The writer needs to take storytelling conventions and "stretch them to embody the new insights, the new variations on the themes they wish to convey".
In today's "For Further Reflection" White states that "searching for new ways of disclosing the truth of things is what the writer has in common with scientists and detectives". In order to do this he urges that the writer learn more about human nature and the natural world. This information will help us discover new ways to relaying the truth.
The "Try This" assignment for today is to outline a story in which your main character's true nature emerges indirectly through her "behind the scenes" thoughts and actions, which contradict the public ones.

Oct. 25: Autumn Leaves
In today's reading White talks about how Autumn speaks to writers. He gives his thinking on how it is a season of many things: learning, new season (TV shows), of fading rich in paradox, a celebration of summer's bounty, the beginnings of winter, of renewal with the sun of "Indian Summer".
For Further Reflection:
Here White states that this is an ideal time not only for study and comtemplation but also for writing. He claims that memories are brighter as the summer sun wanes. Also the intense colors of autumn are a good counterpoint for the "tamer greens and blues of summer months".
The "Try This" assignment:
1. Maintain a list of autumnal images and associations. Descriptions of colorful leaves might top you list, but also include changes in weather, in clothes, in light and shadows, in foods, in the rhytm of daily life; perhaps certain changes in mood or personality as well.
2. Compose a series of autumnal poems. Red Keats's ode, "To Autumn" for inspiration.



Recently I wrote the following article as I contempted something along the lines of #1.
The first frost of the season has signaled that Fall is here. Soon there will be the crisp sound of leaves underfoot when walking in the area parks. In more rural areas where there are no burning bans there will be the acid smoke as piles of these self-same leaves are burned. There are also the bright colors of Fall leaves, brilliant golds, yellows, oranges, and reds paint the local forests and mountain sides. Down quiet village streets there will be the gleeful sound of children playing in piles of the brightly colored bits of nature’s glory.
Along with the brilliant colorful Fall leaves other signs of Fall are the smells of harvested corn, pumpkins, and Fall apples, as well as the smell of Fall treats. Treats that not only come from the bountiful harvests but also the local county fairs, i.e., cotton candy, candied apples, funnel cakes, popcorn balls.
Then there are the sounds of Fall. The eerie honking of geese that fly across the face of a full moon in their traditional “v” formation, or the bulge of male elk in rut. There is the screams of happy children and adults going through local haunted houses. Giggling children dressed as spooks, ghosts, monsters, wizards, and witches as they scurry down village streets with bulging Trick-or-Treat bags. There is the crunch of ripe, tart Fall apples when you bite into one.
All of these are but some of my many memories of Fall. Fall was the time when things sort of slowed down. Not only nature but people as well. Fall is also the signal of coming Holiday seasons Halloween, Thanksgiving and of course the biggest of all Christmas. Fall is the season for festooning your home and yard with decorations of the season. Around the neighborhood people first arranged bales of straw, pumpkins and gourds, big pots of chrysanthemums, and scarecrows. They hang bats and ghosts from tree limbs and drape the front door with larger than life spider webs. These are then followed with colorful turkeys and pilgrims and later Santa, snowmen, and nativity scenes.
Fall was the time I woke up earlier than usual to join my father as he went hunting for pheasant, grouse, ducks, deer, antelope, and elk. I want not so much into the hunt as I was in spending time with my father. There was a bond there in the cold mornings sitting waiting for him to return with the game. Some mornings, particular for duck season, I got to set with him on a hillside overlooking some pond or small lake waiting for ducks to fly in.
Then there were the football games. What girl does not remember the very first time she went to a college football game with a date? The big mum with the school letter attached that he pinned to her jacket or sweater meant more than a simple corsage. It was a badge that she was with him and he was her guy, it symbolized that she was attractive enough to get a date, popular enough. Then there were those special homecoming games and dances. In so many areas Fall football season is a time of special memories for all stages of life.

Friday, October 23, 2009

Oct. 23: Idealism vs. Realism

In today's reading the author, Fred White, addresses the idea being either idealistic or realistic; optimistic or pessimistic. He stated that idealists/optimists "tend to be adventurous, willing to try new things, to take risks, to put a lot of hope in potential; realists tend to settle for what is tried and true, always weighing the odds and making the safest bets." He further states that writers shoulsd "think about the effect that each attitude has on personality and behavior".
In "For Further Reflection"
The author discusses how "love, paradoxically, is rooted in both the ideal and realistic universes". He also gives examples of where the same author can develop characters that exhibit an opposing personality or worldview.
In "Try This" Assignment for today:
1. Are you an idealist or a realist? Write a journal entry in which you answer that question.
2. Outline a short story in which a realist, through some fascinating series of circumstances, becomes an optimist--or vice versa.
Once again do not have time for #2 but here is my answer for #1.
Idealist or realist? I tend to be a little of both. When I think about what I, or someone else can attain as in goals I tend to be idealistic. I have a firm belief that people who through their positive belief system can attain any goal particularly if it is in alignment with what is God's purpose for their life's accomplishments. However, the author Fred White, mentioned gambling which is something I almost never do because of the reason he stated. I believe that the odds of winning are so great that your odds for winning a certain prize are the same whether you gamble or not. This is particularly true if money is involved. So I don't buy lottery tickets or play slot machines or poker in real life or on the computer. I may enter a contest such as Publisher's Clearing House or writing but never if it involves spending any money. I am also an idealist about our chances of improving our world it we would just all decide to do that. One way I like to think of this is that if everyone who professed to be a Christian would bring one other person to Christ then Christians would out number other religions. Or if everyone recycled, or conserved natural resources.